First of all, its grammar and spelling is very poor. We do not require perfect grammar but when it is bad enough that we are not sure what some sentences are saying or they blend together, then it is a problem.
Your testrun is improperly formatted. A testrun is not a collection of quotes but a sample post you'd hypothetically write in a comm, or several hypothetical posts put together into one through the use of different prompts. We suggest looking at how other players wrote their testruns and doing something similar.
The personality section is very basic and describes things that apply to almost everyone. You need to show that the character has more depth.
Theodore is supposed to be a Newtype, but we do not have any canons with Newtypes in the game other than Gundam X, which was dropped when its sole player quit. Did you intend to make him a Gundam X Newtype? Do note they are different than UC Newtypes.
Your unit's capabilities are not properly explained. It has very unusual technologies such as limit breaker or the animus and anima drive, but it is never said how these were created other than being developed by a NA Technologies scientist.
Please take a look at other apps submitted and accepted into the game until this point to have an idea what are the standards expected from an application.
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First of all, its grammar and spelling is very poor. We do not require perfect grammar but when it is bad enough that we are not sure what some sentences are saying or they blend together, then it is a problem.
Your testrun is improperly formatted. A testrun is not a collection of quotes but a sample post you'd hypothetically write in a comm, or several hypothetical posts put together into one through the use of different prompts. We suggest looking at how other players wrote their testruns and doing something similar.
The personality section is very basic and describes things that apply to almost everyone. You need to show that the character has more depth.
Theodore is supposed to be a Newtype, but we do not have any canons with Newtypes in the game other than Gundam X, which was dropped when its sole player quit. Did you intend to make him a Gundam X Newtype? Do note they are different than UC Newtypes.
Your unit's capabilities are not properly explained. It has very unusual technologies such as limit breaker or the animus and anima drive, but it is never said how these were created other than being developed by a NA Technologies scientist.
Please take a look at other apps submitted and accepted into the game until this point to have an idea what are the standards expected from an application.